11/2/11

T.E.'s first poem

thoughts of my dream
under the water my head slowly drowning i can't feel my arms i feel so lonely you appear to be saving me but in your eyes there is nothing to see in my dreams i see what we can be a force so strong a love so free in your head(i think he meant hair??) a flower, a bee in a field or marigolds why am i rejected when my love is bold i feel so forsaken wondering without a soul does my life have a goal? do you see? i'm madly in love with your hair, your smile, your eyes but you push me away and in your heart i know i'll never stay

to whoever is reading this PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE comment on this and tell me what you think
signed, hopelessly confused

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